Hella tight man
This beat is hella sweet man. Its got just that right amount of distinct sound with that BUMPIN beat goin on with it. Insta-downloaded.
Much appreciated. Glad you dug the beat.
Lyrics are good...
The lyrics are good but you gotta work on your rap voice... it sounds... idk how to put it... hoakey? idk... kinda just a personal opinion
Dude this beat is really sick! I was lookin for somethin to practice my flow on top of and this is the perfect style! Keep up the awesome work!
thx man will do
Love it man! 5/5 9/10
Sounds pretty good...
Sounds pretty good... esp. for a first try! If you go back to work on this in the future, i'd suggest trying to add in some dynamic contrast and maybe even some tempo shifts to give the song a little more humanity to it. Right now i feel like i'm listening to a music box play it.. which isnt bad... but it could definitly sound a lot more amazing.
Great work so far! I hope to see more work from you in the future!
Makes ya move
Man this track really makes ya wanna get up and move! Lots of energy and a great beat! great stuff man
Love the groove
This really flows well man. At first i thought it would be really repetitive because its 7+ minutes long, but you did a good job of keeping the listener's interest with those great transitions! Great stuff.
thanks for the comment haha,maybe the song is indeed a bit too repetitive haha
Looking for some bass
This is a pretty decent start. I felt like I was left wanting more, especially in the bass department. Depending on the software you are using, check your sound directories for a House bass or Sub-kick type of sound to really add some *oomph* to your music :D.
Its a good start but there's a lot of room to add some really amazing stuff. I look forward to listening to some more developed stuff from ya :)
I have to agree with breew. I feel like theres almost too much going on here. Some people may like it but i feel like if you simplified some of the distortion and effects you got going on in this track it would be accepted a lot better. However this is your work of music so you do what you like with it.
I'm excited to hear the rest
This has got a great start man! I love the dark and grungy feel to it and i can definitely see where this is going. You really have a lot of options with this piece. You could turn it into a phat rap-style beat easily or into a house trance too. I'm excited to see where you go with this.
Thanks a lot man, and yeah, i'll give it some Electronic variation. But there will still be a bit of that Orchestral feel in it.
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